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Jul 8, 2020 at 21:30 history edited lila CC BY-SA 4.0
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Jul 8, 2020 at 20:52 comment added somebody_other @Allerleirauh thank you so much, will get to that as soon as I can.
Jul 8, 2020 at 20:51 comment added somebody_other @Elmy thank you so much for your encouragement and observations. I'll definitely get to that, and you're right about taking a break and considering. For now I have conserved some immediate thoughts and text fragments (you can see them in the edits (Revisions) in markdown mode).
Jul 8, 2020 at 20:46 history edited somebody_other CC BY-SA 4.0
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Jul 8, 2020 at 8:51 comment added Elmy I agree that this answer is very, very informative, but unfortunately hard to read. Maybe it's harder for non-native english speakers. To me this reads like a transcript of a spoken conversation. Your thoughts wander from topic to topic, and so do your sentences. I had a hard time extracting the most important information from all those words. Maybe take a break for a few hours, then have a fresh look at your answer and condense it down to the informative bits, while leaving out the chatty bits. (Take my +1 anyways)
Jul 8, 2020 at 7:49 comment added Allerleirauh You could look here how I did it ;) pets.stackexchange.com/questions/26115/…
Jul 8, 2020 at 7:45 comment added Allerleirauh Try to bring your most important point(s) into one or two sentences :) my suggestion would be one for "the dog is home where it lives most time" and one for "Huskies are very close with their pack, more than other breeds". You could also do this as first paragraph. "Long in short: ..." and then give the full answer
Jul 8, 2020 at 6:36 comment added somebody_other @Allerleirauh Willing but at a loss for how to write that. What gives? If you have any suggestions please do share them.
Jul 8, 2020 at 5:41 comment added Allerleirauh This is an interesting and informative but long answer. Maybe you could add one or two sentences "in conclusion" as last paragraph?
Jul 8, 2020 at 4:19 history edited somebody_other CC BY-SA 4.0
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Jul 8, 2020 at 4:14 history answered somebody_other CC BY-SA 4.0